Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, April 16, 2020
fiction Parent
This is a fiction story on my dad. I used Docs because it is the easiest DLO to do a story on. it was easy. What did your parents do when they were younger
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Hi Tuari,
ReplyDeleteWhat a hilarious story! How much of it is true? I'm guessing quite a bit.
My favourite line was 'to top it off'. That is a cool phrase to use.
I'm glad you are a lot more sensible than your dad. I wouldn't have wanted to be his teacher!!!!
Hey Tuari,
ReplyDeleteOh my! Your dad sounds like a hoot! I love that his nickname is Wally - well done on explaining why he is called this. Keep up the great focus! Just remember to include the write punctuation when introducing your blog - EG a ? after a question.